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Token Human Adventurer A4 by *karla-chan:iconkarla-chan:

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I wanted to go for an old scroll aim for this? Do you think it looks better then the previous version -> [link]

I might try and add the skecth and see how that looks as well to see which is best, what do you think?

Critiques


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*Sheredin Sep 29, 2009, 8:33:02 AM
Well... humans are always nice I suppose. I do like this a lot more than the original, that greenish blue BG just didn't suit this girl of earthy browns and red. As always your presentation is top notch, she is well proportioned and you followed the rules for flow of energy and matter within the picture based upon the overall movement, well done there, the swords throw me off a little. They look nice, but I can't get over the chains, I think those would get in the way and cause problems for her, especially with a dual wield style. She might hit herself with them, and they seem purely for decoration.

Ah well, fantasy world, fantasy rules. I like it. <3
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~noshibeya Sep 29, 2009, 8:51:10 AM
So cool!:la:

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*karla-chan Sep 29, 2009, 9:11:17 AM
Thanks, i am happy you like it :D

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*Lweeling Sep 29, 2009, 9:12:23 AM
I think I prefer this one, because I'm not fond of the green :XD:

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*karla-chan Sep 29, 2009, 9:14:34 AM
I know, i can't explain why the green just doesn't seem right on the other as well. I am happy you like this better. Thanks so much for your feedback i do really didn't it useful. This picture is an example how i do really listen to what people say, which is why i went back and did a new BG for it.

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*Lweeling Sep 29, 2009, 9:19:50 AM
It's maybe because the colors are more in harmony in the second?
You're right, sometimes people can give good advices :)

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*karla-chan Sep 29, 2009, 10:05:12 AM
I think so too, but i was unsure at first colour wise, because i thought brown would blend too much, where as this is light enough to stand out. And yes the advise on here has really pushed my art forwards.

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=guardian457 Sep 29, 2009, 10:30:25 AM
I think the scroll theme is very apparent and works much better. I think this is probably because the scroll color scheme is more sympathetic to the artwork than the blue-tone background.
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*karla-chan Sep 29, 2009, 10:31:57 AM
I see that is very useful, thanks so much for the advise I am very happy for it.

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*whiteknight222 Sep 29, 2009, 11:31:41 AM
I like her alot :0

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*karla-chan Sep 29, 2009, 11:34:22 AM
Thanks i am happy you do :) I like the hair on this one.

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