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The line-art is here if you want to colour it -> [link]

What do you think? I used two different colours for the flowers.

Critiques


:iconrijio:
I really like the composition, it's been a while since you have drawn a human character I think, so that's really good ^^
I love the flowers as background, it's good you're getting down on making background, so keep up the good work ^^ You also used different colors than the ones U usually use, so it's good too to see some different work.
however I think the image would have more impact if she was looking strait to the front
also some tiny mistakes : the shoulders mayebe looks too "bumpy" to me.
and the hand look strange, maybe too short.
it looks like you only drawn 1 phalanx bone for each finger, while in reality ppl have 2 phalanxes which allows to fold twice the fingers (only the thumbs has 1)

anyway, I like the way you drew the nose
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:icontsukihana-4ever:
I think this picture could be better if you work on it. Hope you improve.
:iconkarla-chan:
What improvements do you think i should make?

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:icontsukihana-4ever:
The ink near the pinky and some of the flower smeared. Try to add a little more detail on the flowers.Are you tring to make it look like relistic cartoon or manga/anime?
:iconkarla-chan:
Half manga and anime and half realistic and I know some of it got smudged it can be a problem with the pens sometimes. What details would you put in the flowers?

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:icontsukihana-4ever:
make it look a little more realistic. but Over all I like it.
:iconkarla-chan:
Awesome, thanks :)

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:iconkarla-chan:
I think i like the cartoonist effect because she doesn't look realistic.

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:icontoshithewolf:
yousa welcome :D

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:iconkarla-chan:
Thanks again :)

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